RonovanWrites Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt Challenge #44 Charge&Lovers
So a new prompt this week from Ronovan Writes: Charge and Lovers, an interesting combination. I wonder what I can come up with?
Here goes, a funny one, no worries this time Ron, no more tomato balloons exploding, I promise! But, I couldn’t resist the redness of the hearts in amongst the frozen gold coins.
Cash Desk Woes
Frozen cash desk woes
Preposterous charge overflows
Poor lovers tiff grows
My attempt at a more serious offering, this is difficult!
Lover’s Staff
Lover’s purple staff
A battle locked last embrace
Killing life’s sweet flame
Why does everything end up sounding ridiculous? Well, I reckon it’s because I find a cute picture and the seriousness gets lost, oh and I have a tendency to be a bit prone to silliness, I suppose, guilty your honour!!!
© Marjorie Mallon 2015 – aka, Kyrosmagica.
Words good or bad, are my very own!
HI Marjorie, I like both and don’t see any of ridiculous on them, I see lots of creativity, I wish I could have a little bit of your creativity!
Thank you Elizabeth, glad you liked them. Appreciate your comment. 🙂
They’re both nice, Marjorie! I enjoyed the first one most––gave me a tickle. 😀
Thanks Vashti, good to know, a tickle is always a good thing especially on a Friday night!
Ha, ha! I completely agree. 😉
Hi Marjorie, thought I’d have a shot at a Haiku hope you don’t mind?
How much do you charge/Lover of red light areas/When in Amsterdam?
I kind of get the feeling a bit of red madness is descending upon haiku land, thanks for your shot at haiku!
Black madness more like!
Glad you’re admitting to it! I’m still in denial!