Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 37 – SMOKE & VEIL #Tanka #micropoetry


The prompt words this week are smoke and veil. They fit in beautifully with a particular character in my book : Book 1 – The Curse of Time – The Bloodstone which I am currently formatting with a planned release date to be confirmed this August…

The particular character I have in mind looks a bit like the young man in the photo below…. I shall be doing a character interview post soon.

Photo courtesy of my keen photographer daughter Georgina. Thank you to  J. English, (media studies, drama student,) for agreeing to be our model!



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    • Yes, I really can’t see the appeal Denis. But, I’ve never been a smoker. Sadly, by the time they realise the damage of smoking they will be hooked. :Unfortunately m brother still smokes but my hubby gave up years ago after witnessing his dad’s battle with emphysema.


  1. Wow! Powerful tanka, Marje and wonderfully dark! Brilliantly descriptive in just a few words: ‘Like burnt rubbish, smoke and fear’ …terrific! The photograph matches perfectly and your daughter is very skilled in her art. Is this something she wants to take on further and work with?

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    • Thank you so much Annika. There will be a lot of Tanka in the book, so I’m glad you enjoyed this one, which I probably will use for promotional purposes. Georgina intends to further her photography and media studies at University level, so I am giving her every opportunity I can. She is helping me with character photos, my author photos and also will be working on a book trailer for me later on.

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