
My submission for Charlie Mill’s flash fiction challenge:
The Crumb’s Obituary
For one day I crave silence.
Your words crush my soul making me weep. Your tongue is bitter, cruel and relentless, it pokes fun at my crawling. I must do as you please, surrendering to your every whim.
‘Look at this,’ you say, scowling.
I move towards it, this lonely crumb which sits on the kitchen surface begging for forgiveness.
‘Oops,’ I respond, trembling.
‘Dear God. You’re multiplying ant – look at the state of this place.’
I step back waiting for him to strike.
Instead, his thumb bears down on the tiny crumb and crushes it to death.
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Interesting take Marje!!
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Thanks Ritu. It started off very sad but then I decided to make it more light-hearted. I prefer it this way. Lol.
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😃
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This is so good Marje 💜
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Thank you Willow. I struggled with it but am quite pleased how it turned out. 🙂
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I think it is really good 💜
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Cool, so much said in so few words!
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wow, you’ve made the reader aware of so much in such short prose. It’s very good, Marjorie, it made me shiver and reminded me of my past. Well written, sis. ❤
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Poor crumb! Such an emotional piece for such a simple activity!
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Thank you. Perhaps it’s because I hate cleaning and cruelty that these emotions came to the fore.
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Excellent Marje.. and powerful… x
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Thank you Sally. x
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Well done Marje. Good luck with the competition.
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Thanks Lizzie. This one’s a flash fiction prompt I’m not finding time for competitions at the moment. Too busy trying to make some inroads in my MS.
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Marje, the oppression gives way to the unexpected. What an interesting perspective!
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It was a bit of a strange one! Lol.
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That’s a bit of a crumby story, Marje. But I mean it in the nicest possible way. 🙂
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It is a odd one!
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What a killer last line.
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Thank you glad you think so!
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