I couldn’t resist doing some Hourglass poetry too, via Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge: https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2016/03/02/poetry-challenge-20-hourglass-poetry/
More about the form: ten lines with a syllable count of 5.4.3.2.1.2.3.4.5, on Jane’s blog. Basically you end up with nine lines.
True happiness lives
Simplicity
Lies in the
little
breaths
of life
Death clings on
Memories lived
Simple Moments Shared.
Hope you liked my hourglass poetry, it’s a bit of a paradoxical one about happiness too. Hope it doesn’t give you the heeby-geebies.
Bye for now,
Marje @ Kyrosmagica xx
Not creepy at all. You have a very peaceful idea about death and…the rest 🙂
Thanks Jane, glad you didn’t find it creepy!
My pleasure. I loved the sentiment.
:)))
I really like it! Nice new look for your blog Marje!
Thanks Lynz, glad you enjoyed my hourglass poetry and new blog look. I’ve had fun finding a new theme… I really like it too.
I do too!
This is a beautiful poem! And truly, all that matters are the simple moments shared.
Thank you! Yes simple moments are the best. 🙂
I loved it! 🙂
Aww thank you Debby! 🙂